Thursday, 3 November 2011

Scene Break Down

EXT.STREET/FOREST(intercut).NIGHT

The street is deserted. a  dark figure moves towards a girl we see hands wrap around her neck.
 The dark figure dumps a body bag into a hole in the woods. CUT TO

INT.HOUSE.DAY

Suzy is in her home drinking coffee while watching the news, the main headline is about a local serial killer. FADE TO

INT.POLICE STATION SUZY'S OFFICE.DAY

We see a file for the serial killer case on suzys desk then we see a flustured juliana walk in flustered and pester suzy to do a better job finding her daughters killer. Just as Suzy goes to usher out juliana the phone rings suzy goes to answer it the phone call gives them about an anonomous clue at a car park. FADE TO

 EXT.CAR PARK/CAR(intercut).NIGHT

Juliana and Suzy arrive at the car park shadow a go along the wall and scurrying noises are heard. Suzy goes off to investigate leaving Juliana on her own. The mysterious figure emerges attacks and kills Juliana then runs off. The figure gets into a car then pulls off her mask revealing her self to be Suzy.
FADE TO CREDITS

1 comment:

  1. Lovely twist, and you have thought about the time restrictions too, well done!

    Next draft, start to think about extra detail, elements of mise-en-scene, and camera angles.

    Keep it up!

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