A series of local murders have been taking place and Suzy King a young successful detective has been given the responsibility to find the psychotic serial killer.
Meanwhile Julia Presmore a stressed out mother and wife is grieving over the disappearance of her Only daughter.
One day she goes into the station and while she is there the phone rings and gives them anonymous tip as to where the murder could be, wanting to confront the villain her self Julia tags along to the location that was given.
Julia and Suzy are alone together in a car park eery shadows creep up the walls so Suzy goes to investigate.
And leaves Julia on her own moments later a mysterious figure comes out of the darkness and murders her.
We follow the figure from behind until they eventually get into a car take off their disguise and reveal them selves to be Suzy.
Script
The street is deserted and dark the rain is pouring,the street looks miserable. A dark figure stands under at the corner of the road illuminated only by the light of a single lamp post. He stares off into the distance for a moment then silently crosses the road then moves towards a girl. We see two hands in leather gloves wrap around her neck.
(girl tries to scream)
EXT.THICKWOOD.NIGHT
The dark figure is then in a thick wood standing by a deep body length hole he dumps an object wrapped up and taped in a bin liner into it.
INT.FRONTROOM.DAY
Suzy, in her mid 20's, tall, brunette and athletic is in her home drinking coffee while watching the news she sits down stiffly and turns the volume up,
tv (vo) woman's:
"Maddison Presmore has been missing for 2 weeks, detectives think her disappearance is linked to the serial killings done previous this month"
the main headline is about a local serial killer she turns of the t.v abruptly closes her eyes and massages her head.
INT.OFFICE.DAY.
We see a file for the serial killer case that was on the news previously on suzys desk then we see a flustered Juliana 40 year old, blonde woman walk in flustered and pester suzy to do a better job finding her daughters killer
Juliana:
"C'mon detective theres GOT to be something you can do!"
Suzy:
"Listen Mrs.Presley you know i wish i could, but i'm under so much pressure right now please just let me do my job"
Julian:
(tears up) "i'm just so worried"
Suzy:
"i know, i know well find her"
EXT.CARPARK.NIGHT
Juliana and Suzy arrive at the car park shadow a go along the wall and scurrying noises are heard.
Suzy:
"Dont worry its nothing,listen you stay here ill go investigate"
Juliana:
"NO! don't leave me!"
Suzy:
"Don't worry i'll be back"
EXT.CAR PARK/CAR(intercut).NIGHT
Suzy reassures Juliana then goes off to investigate leaving Juliana on her own. The mysterious figure from the start emerges attacks and kills Juliana (Juliana screams) then runs off. The figure gets into a car then pulls off her mask revealing her self to be Suzy.
My film should be made because the genre i have chosen is the easiest and cheapest to make. Also because my films story is easy to follow there aren't that many scenes so it would fit into the time limit given.
I chose my story because of the recent riots which have knocked trust in the authority i thought i would take advantage of the situation and try to provoke that idea.
I chose my story because of the recent riots which have knocked trust in the authority i thought i would take advantage of the situation and try to provoke that idea.
