Script: 2nd Re-write

EXT.STREET.NIGHT
The street is deserted and dark the rain is pouring,the street looks miserable. A dark figure stands under at the corner of the road illuminated only by the light of a single lamp post. He stares off into the distance for a moment then silently crosses the road then moves towards a girl. We see two hands in leather gloves wrap around her neck.
(girl tries to scream)
 
EXT.THICKWOOD.NIGHT
The dark figure is then in a thick wood standing by a deep body length hole he dumps an object wrapped up and taped in a bin liner into it.





 INT.FRONTROOM.DAY
Suzy, in her mid 20's, tall, brunette and athletic is in her home drinking coffee while watching the news she sits down stiffly and turns the volume up, 

tv (vo) woman's: 

"Maddison Presmore has been missing for 2 weeks, detectives think her disappearance is linked to the serial killings done previous this month"

the main headline is about a local serial killer she turns of the t.v abruptly closes her eyes and massages her head.


INT.OFFICE.DAY.
We see a file for the serial killer case that was on the news previously on suzys desk then we see a flustered Juliana 40 year old, blonde woman walk in flustered and pester suzy to do a better job finding her daughters killer

Juliana: 

"C'mon detective theres GOT to be something you can do!"

 Suzy:

"Listen Mrs.Presley you know i wish i could, but i'm under so much pressure right now please just let me do my job"

Julian:

(tears up) "i'm just so worried"

Suzy:

"i know, i know well find her" 

EXT.CARPARK.NIGHT

 Just as Suzy goes to usher out Juliana the phone rings suzy goes to answer it the phone call gives them about an anonomous clue at a car park.

Juliana and Suzy arrive at the car park shadow a go along the wall and scurrying noises are heard.

Suzy:

"Dont worry its nothing,listen you stay here ill go investigate"

Juliana:

"NO! don't leave me!"

Suzy:

"Don't worry i'll be back" 

 EXT.CAR PARK/CAR(intercut).NIGHT 

Suzy reassures Juliana then goes off to investigate leaving Juliana on her own. The mysterious figure from the start emerges attacks and kills Juliana (Juliana screams) then runs off. The figure gets into a car then pulls off her mask revealing her self to be Suzy.

Script: 1st Re-write

The street is deserted and dark the rain is pouring and the street looks miserable. A dark figure stands under at the corner of the road illuminated only by the light of a single lamp post he stares off into the distance for a moment then silently crosses the road then moves towards a girl we see two hands in leather gloves wrap around her neck
(girl try's to scream).
 The dark figure is then in a thick wood standing by a deep body length hole he dumps an object wrapped up and taped in a bin liner into it.

Suzy, in her mid 20's, tall, brunette and athletic is in her home drinking coffee while watching the news she sits down stiffly and turns the volume up, 

tv (vo) woman's: 

"Maddison Presmore has been missing for 2 weeks, detectives think her disappearance is linked to the serial killings done previous this month"

the main headline is about a local serial killer she turns of the t.v abruptly closes her eyes and massages her head.


We see a file for the serial killer case that was on the news previously on suzys desk then we see a flustured juliana 40 year old, blonde attractive woman walk in flustered and pester suzy to do a better job finding her daughters killer

Juliana: 

"C'mon detective theres GOT to be something you can do!"

 Suzy:

"Listen Mrs.Presley you know i wish i could, but i'm under so much pressure right now please just let me do my job"

Julian:

(tears up) "i'm just so worried"

Suzy:

"i know, i know well find her" 

 Just as Suzy goes to usher out Juliana the phone rings suzy goes to answer it the phone call gives them about an anonomous clue at a car park.

Juliana and Suzy arrive at the car park shadow a go along the wall and scurrying noises are heard.

Suzy:

"Dont worry its nothing,listen you stay here ill go investigate"

Juliana:

"NO! don't leave me!"

Suzy:

"Don't worry i'll be back" 

Suzy reassures juliana then goes off to investigate leaving Juliana on her own. The mysterious figure from the start emerges attacks and kills Juliana (juliana screams) then runs off. The figure gets into a car then pulls off her mask revealing her self to be Suzy.

Primary and Secondary research

Primary

• We are going to send out a survey to around about 20 people some of the questions we are going to include is going to be:
• What do you think about social networking
• Does the younger generation rely on social networking too much?
• Does social networking have a big impact on your life?
• What are you on most? 

          My space            Facebook

           Twitter               Msn

One of the other things that we would like to include in our documentary for primary research is getting a small group of people and letting them have an open discussion about some of the issues raised by our documentary.

Wed like to conduct an experiment to prove some of our points myself, Heritier and Waqas will go a whole 3 days without any social networking at all everyday we will do either a report on blogger or a recording and at the end we will see how each of our social statuses have changed and do an evaluation.

Secondary

Statistics: One thrid of the worlds population who uses the internet was influenced by sociL networking.

almost 20% of the world uses facebook.



We are also gonna use some of the London riot articles and how bbm helped the riots
we would also have a few bits and pieces taken out from the articles about the arab spring and all of the other political goings on that facebook has aided.