The woman is then at work she's a detective the one who's investigating the case of the mysterious cereal killer. A flustered woman comes in she's the mother of the girl we saw murdered earlier she pesters the investigator to pick up her game and start a real investigation. Just as the mother goes to leave a phone rings the detective answers its a muffled voice giving them a lead on the murderer.
The woman and the detective go alone to investigate the clue they had been given while they start to investigate they see mysterious shadows and hear scurrying noises. The detective tells the woman to stay while she goes to search for the mysterious figure. About once the detective goes the mysterious figure from the start comes out and attacks the woman the woman is killed and then the mysterious figure runs away when the mysterious figure gets in its car its takes off his hat and mask and reveals herself to be the detective.
This is a really well though-out treatment sabira, well done! I particularly like the use of tension and suspense.
ReplyDeletenext you need to break your treatment into Ncenes, each with an individual scene heading. You can find the scene headings on my blogger post.